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January 06, 2005

「電車男」にツッコミ。

会社の人に借りました。
持つべきものは平均的な優しい同僚。

・すっげー臨場感!興奮する!(30代男性)
・読み始めたら止まらない!(30代男性)
・今晩寝れなくなるから気を付けて!(30代男性)
と、絶賛の声がぞくぞくと届いております。
全部同じ人だが・・。

この貸してくれた人って、
超絶「いいひと。」なんですよ。そりゃあもう。
彼が喜ぶようなもの、すなわちベストセラーを
midoroみたいな毒虫が読んでも面白いのかなあ。
とっても不安だけど、エンタメ自体は好きだから
挑戦してみっか。

てなわけで、触りを読んでみました。
・・・うさんくさい。
初っ端から胡散臭過ぎます。
基本的に疑ってかかる姿勢で読んでるから
目に付くのかもしれないけど、
めっちゃネタっぽいなあー!!
こんなのもう今更言うまでもなく、当たり前のこと?

ところで、皆さん、電車男のストーリーは
もちろんご存知ですよね?
秋葉君な冴えない電車男がある日、電車の中で
からまれた女性を助け、彼女と親しくなるために
2ちゃんねるの仲間たちと相談しながら奮闘し、
結果、フィクションとしか思えないほどの
奇跡的なノンフクションが起こり得た!
っていうのを、当時のスレッドそのままに写して来た本です。
だから横書きで左から始まってるんですが、
何読んでるか、端から見て
一目瞭然なのでかなり恥ずかしい。

で、何が胡散臭いかといいますと、
単に電車男が文章下手で、「人に物事を伝えるときには
こういうことを書くんだよ」っていうのを
知らないだけかもしれないけど、
描写がたいへんおざなりで抽象的です。
「派手すぎず地味すぎず」って書いてあるけど、
相手の女性が学生風なのか会社員風なのかすら
よく分からない。

具体的な目に見える描写があまりないんです。
例えば、貰ったティーカップの柄とか
食事したときの洋服の色とか形とか。
「おめかししてる」としか書いてないので、
実際に見て会って体験したのではなく、
頭の中だけで作り上げた文章のように見えます。
逆にそういう描写がきっちり書いてあったら、
ほんと小説になっちゃうから、現実のスレッドには
書いてないのが当然なのかな?

電車男が思い出す会話もステレオタイプで、
全体的に想像力貧困な人が考えたトレドラみたい。
昔、サークルの先輩がこういう小説書いてたなー。
まあ現実なんて所詮こんなものかもしれませんが。

あと、電車男が初っ端から
「何かを期待している」風なのもちょっと変。
でも、秋葉君の心理なんて分からないから
この辺はなんとも言えない。

なので、電車男の話はもうフィクションだと解釈して
読むことにします。
というか、皆、普通にそうしてるのか?
だって、ほんと展開とか早過ぎるんだもん。

2004年の3月14日(日)の夜に、
電車男は女の人を助けて、
3月16日(火)の夜には、お礼のティーカップが届いた。
てことは、相手の女性は3月15日(月)中に
「仕事柄安く手に入る」ということで、
エルメスのティーカップを調達し、
同日中に宅急便で手紙と共に発送。
仕事、速っ!!
世間様ってそんなスピードで動いてるの?
midoroには信じられん世界だ。

それでも、ついつい先を読んでしまうのは、
やっぱりコメントしている皆のおかげ。
こっちはほんとリアルな生の声って感じで(当たり前だが)
いろんな意見が飛び交ってるのが、面白い。
特殊用語も、へーって感じ。
「あぼーん」とか「DQN」とか。

そんで皆、親切なのよ、ほんとに!
オロオロしまくりの電車男に丁寧なアドバイスが
皆から送られます。
その中に、おいおい、そのアドバイスはどうかと思うよ!
そんなこと言われたら相手の女性は引くよ!
ってのがところどころ出て来てハラハラさせられたり。
「ティーカップが2個って誘ってるようにしか思えない」とか。
それは普通ですって!落ち着いて!!
「ティーカップはペアで送るのが常識」って
真っ当な意見が出て来てホッとさせられたり。
ドキドキしますね。

なので、「電車男」にはRPG的な面白さがあります。
「勇者が悪の帝王を倒す」ってお話は決まってるんだけど、
そこに至るまでに、いろんな道のりがあって、
こーしよ、あーしよ、ここ行け、それしろ、って
課題をこなして進んで行くのが楽しいの。
ゲームっぽいです。
だから、フィクションorノンフィクションは置いておいて、
読んでて引き込まれるのは本当です。

さあ、最後まで読んで、
感想が変わったらまた更新しまっす。

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